A WALK WITH YOU
Beneath the mist, a walk with you
Beyond the streets on a lane new
Leaving afar the crowds behind
For the love, some moments to find...
A word to say, a smile to share
Lost with you, to find you near
Deep in the heart, left unsaid
Unleashing the words before they fade...
Hand in hand a leisure walk
On the heart the desires knock
A bit of whims, a day to love
In the life a fancied curve...
Have you lately felt it true
The love that was tender as a dew
Bit by bit has grown so bright
As the moon shines in the night...
Unseen, unheard in the life's pace
A call of love, a warm embrace
All we missed, awaits return
Some more of love, some more of the sun...
Last lines are really nice..u write really well dear..:)
ReplyDeleteOpens up beautifully, closes in even more nicely... In the middle it's lovely in bits and pieces but overall quiet a touching composition though I felt slightly lost in these 4 paras starting with "Hand in hand a leisure walk..."
ReplyDeleteYet nice one...
sea of emotions......loved your composition Dipta....want more such love poems......
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